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Amaan
Asalam Alaikum,

kaisay haiN aap sab? umeed hay k khairyat se hoongay, lijiye aaj shuru hota hay Shayar of the Month Contest for the Month of August jis k liye UNKE KHAT lafz diya gaya tha, hmmm unke khat suntay hi kuch haseen lamhaat aur yaadeiN dil meiN jagah bana leti haiN aur hoontooN per muskaan aajati hay magar kabhi kabhi unke khat maazi ki yaadooN ko haal meiN chubun bana deti haiN tu kabhi yeh khat aisay bhi hotay haiN k dil cheer jaata hay parh ker,

inhi khiyalaat aur ehsaasaat ko laikar hum se kuch humaray dostooN ne koshish ki aur apni apni peshkesh laye haiN, un sab members ka tah e dil se shukarguzaar hooN k unho ne apna qeemti waqt diya is contest k liye aur participate kiya

yahaN forum per humaray pas kuch aisay shayar bhi haiN jo shayri ki bohat zaida samjh boojh rakhtay haiN aur urdu adab aur shayri k urooz aur adaab se bakhubi waqif haiN, magar saath saath humaray pas zaidatar woh haiN jo seekhnay k maArahel meiN haiN aur koshish kartay haiN kuch likhnay ki,

maana k urdu adab aur shayri k urooz k hawalay se bohat si ghalti hooN kiya pata poori tehreer usool per na ho, magar hum sab yahaN koshish kartay haiN seekhtay haiN aur yehi koshish hum sab samnay laatay haiN ek doosray k

bas kehnay ka maqsad yehi tha k sari enteries ko ek aisi koshish samjh ker parhiye aur vote kijiye kisi ek ko k us member ne dil se aur khudh apni koshish se likhi tehreer

kuch zaida waqt le liya aap sab ka lijiye shuru kartay haiN yeh contest meri apni likhi gayi koshish k saath, yeh include nahi hay contest meiN

unke khat meiN yeh salaam kiska tha
tehreer unki magar paigaam kiska tha

woh kah chalay aap nahi qasoorwaar
bey-wafaayi ka phir ilzaam kiska tha

pal pal k haalaat se woh mere waqif
jane yeh purkhuloos kaam kiska tha

manzil pe aa ker aaj sooch tou zara
woh qissa-e-ishq-nakaam kiska tha

woh kahayeN kay anmool haiN hum
tu phir woh dou kauri daam kiska tha

zinda logooN meiN apna hay shumaar
janay phir qatal sar-e-aam kiska tha

woh kahayeN khudh ko faqt Amaan ki
per baad naam un k naam kiska tha

ab shuru hoti haiN contest ki enteries, parhiye lutf uthaaye aur apna qeemti vote dijiye
Amaan




(1) By Marsgirl (Sana ji)

Ek kagaz ka tukra tha jo sub kay liyee
Alfaz aur harf thay perhnay walon kay liyee

Hum say pucho woh kagaz ka tukra tha yan phir...
Woh Alfaz aur harf woh seyahee the yan phir...

Khun-e-jigar kahein yan kahein pyar ka rang
Unke khat anay say pehlay intezar tha sang

Woh Ehsas aur jazbat mehaz hum mehsos ker sakay
Woh likhtay gaye aur hum perhtay gayee

Mazi ki keriyan jo jurte gayein
Ek zanjeer main Hum jagartay gayee

Ab sirf Hum thay aur Unke khat
Woh bekhabar... Hum tamam raat rote rahay....




(2) By Raj ji

jab bhii seene se lagata hoon unke khat
dil ki manind dharkte pata hoon unke khat......

jaag kar raaton ko aalam-e-tanhai mein
khamoshi se gungunata hoon unke khat......

sard raaton mein khule aasmaan talle
aksar odhke soo jaata hoon unke khat........

jab kabhi berang sa lagta hai dil apna
tab deewaaron pe sajata hoon unke khat.....

sard pad jaate hain jab armaa.N mere
garmiye jajbaat ko jalata hoon unke khat......

begaane ho jaate hain wo jab khud se
aise mein unhii ko de aata hoon unke khat......

dard-e-judaii saha nahi jata kabhii jab
tab aankho.N se bahata hoon unke khat





(3) By Notorious (Warda ji)

Unke khat par naam apna dekh kar khil jaaoun jaise
Tez beqaboo dhadkanon par kaboo paaoun kaise

Pardes gaye piya jabse, tabse paas rakhti hoon unke khat
Takiye neeche rakh kar, unki baahon mein soh jaaoun jaise

Kalam ne araam kiya hoga unke honthon par yakeenan
Inn lafzon ko choom kar unke honth chuu paaoun jaise

Kaagaz mein ik khushboo si samaayi hui hai unki, isse
Seene se lagaa kar unki khushboo se mehek jaaoun jaise

Milan ka likhte likhte woh muskuraaye toh honge
Uss muskaan ke iraadon par main na sharmaaoun kaise

Ek khat ko parh parh kar khush ho jaati hoon main, par
Ek kaagaz se khud ko tassalli kuch der aur dilaaoun kaise





(4) By Wafa ji

Bade Der se aaya hai unka Khat Khusboo Mehkaatey Huve.
Woh Khoobsurat Lamhom ko yaad Dilaatey Huve

Hum ne badi betaabi se unke khat ko Chooma.
Jo Hamarey liye naya Paigaam laya huva hai

Shokh Chanchal si unki Nazrein Yaad Dilaaye Hamey
Un ke Khat ne Humare Dil mein shor karte huve

Aankhon ki Zuban se bolna chahtey hain, Par Sansein Thamti Nahi
Khat ko Hathon mein thaam kar Neendh ke aagosh mein chaley gaye.

Aankhen Khwab se bedaar huve to Dekha humne
Ke Yeh sab ek Sapna tha Unka Khat

Phir Humey Intezaar rahega ke Koi Khat bheje
Badi Betaaabi se padna Chahenge aise Dildaaar ka Khat

Warda
yayyyyyyyyyy dance.gif dance.gif dance.gif ...i get to read!! wink2.gif

awesome awesome...so pplz...vote fairly! tongue.gif
Princess
Awesome writes...

Good luck to the participants. May the best poem win.
Roja
Good luck everyone

Good job Amaan
Saqib
Achhi koshish ki hain chaaro Shauraa ne, magar more hardwork is required guys. Woh mazaa, woh nashaa, woh adaaa, woh khushi, alfaazo mein dhaaltey jaao toh kitaab ban jaaye. isliye mehnat karke selected sher banaaye jaaye toh yeh ek beHtareeN topic hain,

anyways good start and good work
Amaan
Saqib ji aapki baat baja hay k aur hard work ki zaroorat hay aur agay bhi rahayegi, magar yahaN bas koshish jitni bhi hosakay utna laikar aatay haiN hum sab loog, khushi hoyi jaan ker k aap in koshish ko sarahatay haiN

Allah hafiz
Amaan
♥♣ Manisha ♣♥
beautiful presentation amaan ji..simple just like u..this is what we like sadgi rolleyes.gif

humne humara vote de diya hia..and aapne bhi bohot hi aacha likha hai amaan ji ..there is nothing like who hosts the show is not allowed to participate..so hoping to see ur entry next time..and haan iss baar hume bhi maaf kijyega for not participating par will surely next time..

take care ji
Roja
voted, comeone guys vote jaldi jaldi
ibn-e-adam
zulm hai itni khud eitemadi bhi faraz
raat bhi andheri thi chirag bhi na liya

Amaan jii khud eitemadi ka pata nahi par not making the starting gazal a part of the contest is zulm in reality . I loved it but as for the other participants would wait to see where my judgement takes me.
Amaan
Salam Bilal ji

khudh aitemaadi ki baat nahi, maiN host kar rah tha is liye maiN ne include nahi ki apni tehreer, jo host hota hay woh usually jab koi contest shuru karta hay yah agaaz karta hay tu saath saath us contest k unwaan per kuch na kuch keh deta hay kabhi kisi aur ki likhi gayi yah kabhi apni wording tu bas issi wajah se maiN ne aisa kiya

Allah hafiz
Amaan
Amaan
voting monday tuk close hojayegi
Princess
Voted
Pal
Me too boated boated biggrin.gif
Amaan
voting closed
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