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Kamsin Kali
Aadaab Dosto !!

Swagat Hai aap sab ka Sunehre Pal me..

Aur waade ke mutabit hum hazir hai aap ki kalaam ke sath jo aap ne bade pyar aur mehnat se likhi thi mushaire k liye.

Es muqable ko Trahi Mushaira kaha jaata hai aur es ke rules kuch is tarha se hai ke diye gaye misre ko apni nazm me istemal karna hai aur usi zameen per poem likhni hai aur wo bhi radeef aur qafiya sahi tarhe se nibhate huwe.

es maah ka hamara diya gaya misra tha " Main unse keh raha hu mujhe yaad kijiye "

Toh voting shuru ki jaye ?? Yaad rahe vote karne ki aakhri tarikh hogi 15th Aug..aur aap ko jeetana hai sab se umda nazm ko jo ke waqhi kabil ko jeet ne ke.






Poem 1

Yaadein sameyt lijiye yun na fariyaad kijiye
Main unse keh raha hoon mujhe yaad kijiye

Damaan main sameyti hai tere liye khushi
Ishq ki iss naiyaa ko zara imdaad kijiye

Tanhaiyo ne seekhaya hai hume muskurana
Meri iss dewaangi ki to zara daad dijiye

Gar kaho to main mehka doon raatien tumhari
Tanhaa guzaar kar inhe youn na barbaad kijiye

Labon par rehta hai sirf or sirf zikar aapka
Meri iss dewaangi par kuch toh aitmaad kijiye

Hum toh aapki yaadon mein khoye rehte hain
Chupke hi sahi,humse milne ki muraad kijiye



Poem 2

Mein unse keh raha hoon mujhe yaad kijiye
Unko yeh zid ke huzoor fariyaad kijiye

Na milte na bulate na chhipte na dikhte
Is tarq-e-ta'aalluq ka sabab irshaad kijiye

Takht-o-taaj-o-laal-o-jawahar ke kiya maani
Ho sake to mere mehboob yeh dil abaad kijiye

mausam-e-Ishq aur yeh paas-e-rawadari
Shabaab-o-jawaani ko na yun barbaad kijiye

Chaliye uthiye miyan chalein kisi aur des
sanam kade ko janaab ab khairabaad kijiye



Poem 3

Mein un sey keh rahaa hoon mujhe yaad kijiye
Zindagi se har gham ko Aaba-o-ajdaad kijiye

Aaba-o-ajdaad=extraction

DeewaaroN mein ghira ghar veeraaN hain mera
Apane khadamoN se tum aakar aabaad kijiye

Meri daastaan-e-ulfat hain tumse he toh sanam
Chaahe toh sar-e-aam isey roodaad keejiye

roodaad=statement

Ham tadaptey hain aapko dil mein apne rakhne
Kabhi mere dil mein basne ki muraad keejiye

Yeh zindagi binaa aapke hain kuch bhi nahi
Nahi aa sake toh khatm meri miyaad keejiye.

miyaad=time

Keh deejiye ki ham sahi hain sabhe saamne,
Yaa phir Hadaf-e-naavak-e-bedaad keejiye.

Hadaf-e-naavak-e-bedaad= na insaafi



Poem 4

Mere marne se pehley ek baar mujhe pyar kijye
'' Mein oon sey keh rahaa hoon mujhe yaad kijiey ''

tere chaale jaane se yeh zingadi veeran si ho gaye hai
aapne pyar se iss zingadi ko phir se aabaad kijiye

teri raahon main bathey hain palkey beechaye hue
aa kar pass hamare hume is gume-e-tanhyee se azaad kijiey

aapni zingadi se baadkar chhah hai humne tujhe
hamari iss chhahat ka ek baar to ehsaas kijiye

tere aagosh main hi dum nikle aarzoo hai humari
aap bhi hamare liye bas yehi fariyaad kijiye

reh reh kar yaad satati hai teri is deewaane ko
aae shamma apni loa se jaala kar hume khak kijiye

'' Mein oon sey keh rahaa hoon mujhe yaad kijiey ''



Poem 5

chahton ka nagar phir se abaad kijiey
main unse keh raha hoon mujhe yaad kijiey

gar ho sake to khud ko sanbhaliye janaab
yun na sang dilon ke saamne fariaad kijiey

mumkin hai chaand uttar aaye zamee.n par
naazuk labbon se ik dafa irshaad kijiey

ho griftaar aap bhi mohabat ki qaid mein
pinjre mein rehke khud ko na sayaad kijiey

wo laut ke na aaiynge dekhna ab kabhi
unke liye na dil ko yun nashaad kijiey



Poem 6

maiN unse keh rah hooN mujhe yaad kijiye
kuch tu iss barbaad dil ko shaad kijiye

-shaad=khush

hum per hay laazim aapki aseeri magar
iss qaid-e-tanhayi se tu azaad kijiye

-aseeri=griftaari/arrest

jab hoye raakh aag-e-ishq meiN jal ker
woh keh rahaye haiN koi faryaad kijiye

yoN tu tehray wafadar hum bhi aap bhi
wafa-o-jafa ki aaj zara taAdaad kijiye

-taAdaad=quantity count karna

tahayat nakaam panay meiN apki rifaqat
lehad tu apnay ehsaas se abaad kijiye

-lehad=qabar

is dukhi zeest ka koi anjaam ho akhir
chalye yehi sahi humaiN barbaad kijiye



Poem 7

Dil Ke Viraane Angan Ko Phir Abaad Kijiye
Main Unse Keh Raha Hu Muje Yaad Kijiye

Aab Phir Utha Hai Sar Katwane Ka Janoon
Puri Ho Yeh Hasrat Bhi, Yahi Fariyaad Kijiyee

'O' Aapne Dard Ki Dastan Likhne Wale
Kuch Mere Bhi Jakhmo Ka Hisaab Kijiye

Is Kadar UjaRu Ke Kuch Naa Bachey Tere Siwaa
Jo Kijiyee To Is Kadar Muje Barbaad Kijiyee


Jindagii Ke Thapero Se Wo Khoo Chukaa Hai Apni Rangat
Phir Chu Kar Aapne Honton Se, Us Se Gulab Kijiyee


Hai Fitrat Yahi "Takalus" Ki, Wo Bas Jiyaa Hi Hai Is Kadar
Nafraat Ho To Be-Intehaa Ho, Mohabbat Kijiyee To Be-hisaab Kijiyee



Poem 8

Duniya ka sataya hova hoon,aap na barbaad kijiey.
Dard-e-dil se majboor hoon, thoda widaad kijiey..

Zulm-o-Sitaam tere aur zakhm-e-jigar mere.
Aap har-bar yu na hamein naa-shaad kijiey.

Na hai zikr unke lab-pe,Na kiya muraad koyee...
Mein oon sey keh rahaa hoon mujhe yaad kijiey..

Be-sabaab Ashq na bahao,bazm-me mere naamke..
Gar-agar hai Gila humse tu Faryaad kijiey.


Sub-laut chuka hai aur na barbaad kijiey..
Gar hai agar yaar tu thoda imdaad kijiey..


dhoonthe-hai sahara mere raqeebo ki gali..
khade hai raazdaan,hampe bhi Etamaad kijiey....

Widaad=Love.
Naa-shaad=Sad.
Muraad=disere,wish.
Faryaad=Complain.
Imdaad=Help.
Raqeeb=Enemy.
Raazdan=Friends.
Etamaad=trust.



Poem 9

Yeh jo shor sunai deta hai teri bazm me Mani,
Main oon sey keh rahaa hoon mujhe yaad kijiey.

Meri zindagi me phir aa jayiye, kuch pal hi sahi,
Uske baad bhale hi mujhe barbaad kijiey.

Sah lunga aapka har zulm, aa to jayie
Uske baad mere sath koi be-daad kijiey.

Main yaad karooN, aisa dastoor to nahi,
Par ek baar bhool jaane ki fariYaad kijiey.

Qaid hun main kuch waaydoN ke jangal me,
Bas Ek baar aakar mujhe aazaad kijiey.

Maalum hai ki a yyaam aapke bhi suthre nahi hai,
par mere jaane ke baad hi koi fasaad kijiey.

Mujhe to bhula hi diya hoga aapne,Khush Rahiyega,
ab zara khudko bhoolne me meri imdaad kijiey.

Ghamon ke sailaab bhi paar kar jayenge aap,
Musarrat Paane ka ek naya tareeqa ijaad kijiey.


be-daad - cruelity
imdaad - assistance
ayyaam - days, life
suthre- beautiful
Musarrat - Happiness

saher
sooooooooo coooooooool............get going
♥♣ Manisha ♣♥
Thanks Kamsin for Continuing over here at sunehrepal..

I think two poems were removed but atleast we have 9 for the competion as yet..

All the best everyone!!
Kamsin Kali
Ji ek poem poet ki request pe nikali hai aur ek rules ke mutabik sahi nahi thi es liye use bhi nikal diya gaya hai.
Warda
come on pplzz...vote!!! smile.gif
Princess
Since the site is new can it be stated as to what the rules were for this competition

At least what the lines were to be used so that any new member coming in also knows what to look for when voting

All the best to all the competetors
Kamsin Kali
Ab tak Sirf 5 hi votes ???
M.S
Voted.

Rgds,
saires
vote kar diya humne
sonal
vote diya....
btw.. jise vote diya hai woh kiski likhi hui entry hai??
kaise pata chalega?
Kamsin Kali
QUOTE(sonal @ Aug 8 2007, 01:34 PM) *
vote diya....
btw.. jise vote diya hai woh kiski likhi hui entry hai??
kaise pata chalega?


Shukriya Sonal ji

Ji voting close hone ke baad sab ke naam disclose kar diye jayenge.
BAN ME
Voted.. smile.gif

Waise Sabhi Entries Kabil-e-tareef hai...
raj
voted........ :excl:


aap logo se bhii guzarish hai ki plzzzzzz vote kijiye or likhne waalon ki housla afzaii kijiye......sabhi kalaam behad dilfrabe hain..........raj.........
Anuragh
voted ji
Harman
Sabee Poem Bouth Acche Hai
Great ...............
Kamsin Kali
VOTING CLOSED
Amaan
Salam

jaisay k aap sab dekh chukay haiN poll results k zariye 2 poems meiN tie hogaya hay jismeiN se ek ko as winner declare karna hay, team ki discussion k baad yeh decide howa hay k poem # 5 ko winner.

Veer ji congrats

aur FunkyIndian ji, aap bhi ek tarah se winner hi haiN as poll result same haiN magar kisi ek ko tu karna hi tha aur team ki nazar meiN Veer ji ki poem ko choose kiya gaya...aapko bhi mubarak ho is competition k liye

maazrat k late hogaye announcment meiN

Allah hafiz
Amaan
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