saher
Aug 2 2007, 06:43 PM
I hope you are all aware of this game.........
Sher ke akhiri lafz ke akhiri leeter se aapko naya sher shuru karna hai..........
and one more thing.......... sher should be your own......
Mujhe to bhula hi diya hoga aapne,Khush Rahiyega,
ab zara khudko bhoolne me meri imdaad kijiey.
TANHA SAGAR
Aug 3 2007, 12:30 PM
Kijiye imdaad meri is duniya se muje ab rukhsat kijiye..
gam jhele hai bahut ab in gamo se muje fursat dijiye..
Amaan
Aug 4 2007, 02:06 PM
yeh raat jaanay kitni taveel ho chali hay
sehar honay tuk kahi hum na chal basaiN
ilesh shah
Aug 4 2007, 06:02 PM
let me try
Basi he dil-o-dimaag me vo is tarha
ki pal pal gujarti he in ke bina tanha
sonal
Aug 4 2007, 07:05 PM
tanha thay kabhi hum zindagi mai
aapse milke ho gai roshni iss dil mai...
ilesh shah
Aug 4 2007, 07:12 PM
mai ne dekha jab se unhe angadai lete
kar diya dil ko behal bina nind ki raate
sonal
Aug 4 2007, 08:27 PM
raate kat rhai hai hamari unki yaado mai
dhudhte hai unhe aaj bhi unhi sitaro mai
ilesh shah
Aug 5 2007, 02:17 AM
mai ne jab chand ko dekha akshar tuje dekha
manga rab se to bas tera hi aasra manga
Amaan
Aug 5 2007, 03:21 AM
maazrat k saath akhri lafz k akhri hurf se shuru karna hay aap sab akhri lafz ko laikar hi start kar rahe haiN, jaisa k Ilesh ji ka shair hay jismeiN akhri lafz MAANGA hay aur MAANGA ka akhri hurf ALIF hay jo k roman urdu meiN A se shuru kiya jaayega
apnay haath ki lakeer hum ne mita daali
nayi taqdeer banayengay hum zindagi ki
Illahi hamain maaf karna ,ke ham nadaan hai..
Sab jaAye khuld main yeh hamare armaan hai..
ilesh shah
Aug 6 2007, 12:37 AM
is dil me sajaye armaan unko pane ke
vakt aate hi tanha kar gaye diwane ko
sonal
Aug 6 2007, 03:22 PM
o mere dil ka chain lutnewale
tujehamesha meri yaad sataye....
ilesh shah
Aug 6 2007, 03:32 PM
E hushn-e-malika juda he jaha taar dil ka
basti he surat esi nahi bhuli jaati yaad unki
sonal
Aug 6 2007, 03:43 PM
inteha ho gai unke intezaar ki
aaj mautne bhi darwaze pe aahat di....
ilesh shah
Aug 6 2007, 05:09 PM
ishq karne wale kaha maut se darte he
ishq-e-gum me marna bhi naseeb mante he
Ek arsaa hogaya hai unse bichade hove..
Tarse Naine aur ham darper khade hove..
Heart_Throb
Aug 6 2007, 06:07 PM
is shayrii ka lafda apun ko jachta nai hai..
kyoki ye mere bheje me atakta nahi hai..
hahahaah

soryy.. mera dil kar ra tha likhne ka..
ilesh shah
Aug 6 2007, 06:20 PM
ek pal bhi saal sa lagta he jab vo nahi milte
ankhiya taras gai unka naam tak dekhne ko
TANHA SAGAR
Aug 7 2007, 10:52 AM
ankho ne jhukna chhor diya unke intzaar me..
rooh bhi baichanin he unke pyar me..
sonal
Aug 7 2007, 02:14 PM
ek baar unse mulaqaat kar lu
aur unki tasveer dil mai basalu...
Unse keh-raha hoon hame yaad kijiye..
Gar gila hai hamse tu faryaad kijiye..
ilesh shah
Aug 8 2007, 12:44 AM
e mohhabat yaado ke sahare to zinda he
milte he kuchh pal lamba intazar dene ko
Cute Angel
Aug 8 2007, 09:01 AM
Koi nahi hai jo sacha pyar kare iss duniya mein,
sabhi dhoke ke ashiq hain yahan...
sonal
Aug 8 2007, 04:09 PM
na kabhi bhule hai hum apako
na bhul paoge aap kabhi humko
ilesh shah
Aug 9 2007, 05:23 PM
o karne wale raakh masum ki muskurahat ko
khuda ka khauf rakh kar dega raakh vo bhi tujko
Cute Angel
Aug 9 2007, 09:11 PM
tujhko har pal muskurate dekhna chahte hain,
chahe hamara chehra muskurana hi bhul gya hai!!
CanadianGhalib
Aug 9 2007, 09:58 PM
Haye tere yeh neem baaz aankhein
Na hosh aaye hai na madhosh kare hai
ilesh shah
Aug 11 2007, 12:38 PM
hai tanha ye zindgi nahi sukun ise kahi
khamosh rat ka andhiyara basa he vahi
TANHA SAGAR
Aug 11 2007, 01:25 PM
Khamosh lab he magar dil me hazaro khawaab palte he..
Khamosh dikhte he magar sine me jazbaato k sailaab machalte he..
Cute Angel
Aug 11 2007, 08:56 PM
he koi iss jahan mein jis par hum marte hain,
par wo bedard hamari jaan ki kimat hi nahi janta...!
:(
Kamsin Kali
Aug 12 2007, 02:53 AM
aarzo ka chaand dooba gham ki gehri jheel mein
dard ki waadi mey hum aye dost tanha reh gaye
Cute Angel
Aug 12 2007, 11:50 AM
ye kaisa pyar tha tera,
khushi ka wada kar, ansuo mein duba gya!!
marsgirl
Aug 14 2007, 02:26 AM
Gaya hai chor ek shaks tanha muj ko
lagta hai phir kyun weran sara jahan?
ilesh shah
Aug 14 2007, 04:17 PM
Jahan weran bana diya is do rangi duniya ne hamara
chale the haath thamkar mazadhar me akela chhod gaye
Roja
Aug 14 2007, 09:04 PM
I m confuse here, should I start from last word or alphabet?
Roja
Aug 15 2007, 03:48 AM
ok lets start the Bait Bazi as we used to play before, start next Sher from alphabet, I hope no one will have any prob with that
so next sher should be from Y
yaa to miT jaa_iye yaa miTaa diijiye
kiijiye jab bhii saudaa kharaa kiijiye
ilesh shah
Aug 16 2007, 06:30 PM
e najnin nahi mit jana kisi ke haatho me
yaha log fir te he mita ne hasti jaha me
TANHA SAGAR
Aug 17 2007, 03:28 PM
Mat dikhana apne jakh har kisi ko..
log hatho me namak liye firte hai..
sonal
Aug 17 2007, 07:32 PM
itna yaad karte hai aapko ki aap bhul na sakoge
itna pyaar karte hai ki binhamare jee na sakaoge
marsgirl
Aug 17 2007, 07:43 PM
Ek pal ke kurbat jana
Tere lams ko hai mehsos kerna
Tu jo kahee to ruswa hojayein
Kho dein hum wajood apna
Johny
Aug 17 2007, 08:06 PM
Aab es hadd pe laya hai intazaar mujhe,
Woh aa bhi jaye to aaye na yaki mujhe.
Roja
Aug 17 2007, 08:43 PM
ek muddat hu_ii ek zamaanaa huaa
Khaak-e-gulashan me.n jab aashiyaanaa huaa
marsgirl
Aug 17 2007, 09:07 PM
Ashiqon ke dharkanein , aur mazlomom ki ahein
Sur Taal kay woh manzar b miltay hain RAAT main
Roja
Aug 18 2007, 12:50 AM
mai.n bhii shaayad buraa nahii.n hotaa
vo agar bevafaa nahii.n hotaa
Johny
Aug 18 2007, 09:01 AM
Aankhon Mein Raha Dil Mein Utar Kar Nahi Dekha
Kashti k Musafir Ne Samander Nahi Dekha
Roja
Aug 18 2007, 09:54 AM
kaafir gesuu vaalo.n kii raat basar yuu.N hotii hai
husn hifaazat karataa hai aur javaanii sotii hai
Johny
Aug 20 2007, 10:29 AM
Humko marne me unhone koe kasar na chodi
Aakho se bache to muskurahat me hamari haase todi
TANHA SAGAR
Aug 21 2007, 10:21 AM
Ham zindgi ko jine k liye unke pyar ka bharosa dete chale gaye..
khabar na thi chhalaava tha vo pyar aur ham barbad hote chale gaye..
Heart_Throb
Aug 21 2007, 11:34 AM
noo.. not good..
you hav no kafiya n radeef.. or apki meter bi barabar ni hai..
Sagar jee i thk is good..
n MS is perfect!!
sorry..I was replying to cute_angel's wo meri jaan ki keemat ko hi nahi janta..
janta nahi jo teri keemat ko hi
bhoolja tu uski shakshiyat ko hi
Wah waa wah waa.. Shabbassss Harry!! hehehehe

meri first try hai.. hasna mat koi biiiii
Johny
Aug 21 2007, 03:29 PM
Hum se kya puchte ho Zindagi ke bare me
Ajnabi bataye kya, ajnabi ke bare me
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